11月23日，济源下了本年度的第一场雪。11月24日上午，同学们和老师一起去校园玩雪。请写一篇日记记录此事。

【要求】

1.布局要合理，篇章完整；

2.要感动自己；

3.学以致用，注意行文流畅；

4.字数控制在100~120字。

5.本次范文在学生佳作中精选。

【佳作选登】作者：赵功陟 等三位同学

24th November Tuesday                                                  Snow

The first snow knocked at the door of the winter yesterday. It snowed so heavily that the world was full of white.

To my surprise,my headteacher let us play with the snow at the playground. As soon as we got to the capus,we began to have a snowball fight. I was making a snowman when a boy threw a snowball to my face. I was so painful that I decided to have a snowball fight with him.

After entering the classroom, I thought a lot.Many people think that a man who is suffering from the failure is in the winter of his life. In my opinion, however, winter is filled with not only the cold but also the snow. The latter, the spirit of winter, can make us happy and encourage us to keep fighting. So it's not wise to give up when we are suffering from the failure.

Thank you. The first snow. Thank you for telling me such a truth.